Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Calm




Calm from Ron Hamm on Vimeo.

14 comments:

  1. Very lighthearted and fun, I liked that water was a theme throughout. I think cutting back and forth between the river and the indoor scenes might have been beneficial. Awesome poster and mug choice.

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  2. I think the sound of the coffee maker may be a tad extreme with the rest of the video.

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  3. good choice of stationary camera angels and cat

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  4. Really nice shots! Not sure if you needed the outdoor scene though. It seemed like a filler to show passing of time, which you could have shot the clock in a stable shot. Overall, well conveyed!

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  5. I liked how the shots were very stable. i think it would have been better if the sound effects were more synchronized with the background music.

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  6. The music sounded like Animal Crossing, or a video game, which I suppose can be calming for some, but it gave a child-like effect that I did not find to be immensely calming.

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  7. I really liked the music choice in this video, it's low key but not just sleeping. You can imagine it as someone goes about on their day off relaxing and having fun.

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  8. Liked the video. There was a sense of calmness, but I felt like maybe the clips of the coffee and putting down the coffee mug could have less sound... it was just too noisy. Also the clip of the park I really did not understand. Other than that, you did a good job man!

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  9. I thought that the video portrayed the emotion well and I like how it had a story to it.

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  10. I liked the simple ways you showed calmness in this video, I would suggest to take out the audio from the video of you walking next to the water because the sound took away from your calm emotion. Nice job though!

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  11. I liked that you portrayed water in the state you did cause that showed water as a calm state. What was also good was you showed sleeping which represented calm as well.

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  12. I liked the transitions between the shots, but the video didnt portray calm to me. The sounds and the camera motions were more of a quick type of feeling. The music was also comedic, I didnt relate it to feeling calm, other than that Good Job!

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  13. I like the camera shots, music and subject matter. It all went well together. The camera was a little shaky near the river but it didn't take away in any way.

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  14. The music made me feel more bouncy rather than calm. I think some of the activity done relays calm, but I feel like other shots were rather unexplained. I understand water is calming, but I don't get the connection in this video. Also, I think some of the noises in the beginning were a bit jarring (When you were making the coffee).

    I do like the music though, I could definitely see it working for calm.

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